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This epic post is like a cabinet stuffed with perceptive observations. I’ve archived it for future research, but I want to make a few points:

Your defense of fanfiction was initially a headscratcher for me, since I’m a shameless snob.

But-- I’m also a connoisseur of the serious defense attorney essay about something I’ve never taken seriously. Your argument connects with me in spite of my prejudice, because I think you’re largely correct about what good storytelling needs to do to make people care about it.

I also agree with the idea that most mainstream “literature” isn’t what it’s cracked up to be. In fact, I think a fair amount of it is only slightly better technically than amateurish fan fiction, and the presumption is that it’s WAY better. And much of the great storytelling of the past flows along for the reasons you cite, and the importance of plot is a kind of illusion.

Hitchcock talked about this a lot; he wanted to reach people emotionally, and the clever plots were mostly contrived to get you to those emotional effects.

I will say this, though-- maybe this is just a semantic difference, but I don’t think this focus on emotional connection is separate from a focus on craft. In my view, it’s absolutely part of the discussion of craft. Maybe the most essential part. Anyone who discusses craft and leaves this out doesn’t understand the craft.

Side note: I am a huge Burroughs fan, but I understand how Naked Lunch et al doesn’t fit your thesis or mine. I love his work for the style and color and tone, but like a lot of artists I love, he connects some dots beautifully and skips past other important ones. I’d love to read a book that borrows some of his style, but uses it to get to the emotional connections with characters. Maybe I’ll write something like that one day; not sure, it might be over my head.

In short: more of the Rachel magic, where i move quickly from “I don’t know what the fuck Rachel is talking about” to realizing “man, the point is that Rachel does know, and I’m starting to get it.”

Sorry for the apparent ass-kissing, but I’m moving you to my “indispensable” list.

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Tom's avatar

On the importance of bivalent relationships, it is notable that fanfic's greatest innovation is the 'slash' - i.e. what would it be like if x + y had a relationship with one another.

All Mantel's Reith Lectures are excellent, but especially 'Silence Grips the Town', on the personal costs of enmeshing yourself that deeply with someone you can never meet. Plenty of lovelorn fans might appreciate the torments she describes.

One reason the Wolf Hall trilogy beats A Place Of Greater Safety is that the events of the French Revolution are a bit too seductive and compelling, she keeps wanting to relate those, as well as show Camille, Danton and Robespierre trading barbs at dinner.

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